Jaylex's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[B-b-b-bioshock!!]

not very good

ok my last review was deleted for being abusive so i'm gonna give u some feedback.

Generally it wasnt all that great, boring and quite tedious. The sound was pretty good though so maybe make something with a bit more zing to it and it shud be good. All you need is a story and comical characters that we like to laugh at.

Mechabloby responds:

Ah. Thank you for the much better review. :)
Yeah, I'll give that a go. I'm actually working on improving my animation completely for this new year so keep an eye out for it. :)

[School For Cacti]

Not bad

I've seen worse flashes that made me want to kill myself, but this one was a decent attempt, bearing in mind this is your first flash. It would be an idea to look at the tutorials to improve your animation, mainly sound, voices and music rele. You'd be surprised but that can boost a vote by about 3 points so a 2 could turn into a four etc. Also with the comedy, it would be an idea to take a look at some films and other mediums to get comic moments from, quick short and snappy scenes can rele make a difference just dont drag stuff out too long that can bore people.

Looking forward to seeing your next flash
p.s. were you influenced by crazyboris?

ZiggyZack99 responds:

1. thank you
2. who is crazyboris?

[SoaD - Bounce!]

Swish

Brilliant just brilliant liked it wen the jok and geek got it not so sure about the goth she was cool.

AcidX responds:

And the moral of the story is EVERYONE DIED! Then the crazy pogo-man and the Aryan woman lived happily ever after ;)